Monday, 30 March 2015

Science writing What is “scientific writing”?

Scientific Writing for Scientists

Definition of genre

Scientific writing frames a problem in the context of current work in the field and explicates the
author(s)’s research using a format that is easy to skim for major findings and conclusions.
Examples of scientific writing include articles for peer reviewed journals, grant proposals, and
theses/dissertations in the sciences. Related genres include Laboratory Reports, Research and
Grant Proposals, and Literature Reviews.
Format
Scientific writing usually follows a standard formal structure, frequently abbreviated IMRD (for
Introduction-Methods-Results-Discussion):
• Abstract: A brief summary of the other sections, typically 100-200 words. Includes
motivation, question, hypothesis, method, and major conclusions. (See our Abstract guide
for more detail.)
• Introduction: Motivation for the research, literature review of previous relevant studies
(background), question(s) addressed by the present research, and hypotheses to be tested.
• Materials and Methods: Summary of the technical information necessary to repeat the
experiments. Includes experimental design, materials, and protocols.
• Results: An objective review of the experimental results. In other words, what happened
when the methods were performed? Frequently includes figures/tables/etc. to present the
data.
• Discussion/Conclusions (sometimes included at the end of Results section): addresses the
question: “do the results support the hypothesis?” Evaluates the strengths and weaknesses
of the experiment, summarizes the implications of the results, and proposes further
research that might clarify or supplement the findings.
• Works cited: APA format is acceptable in most classroom settings. Every journal has its
own formatting style; refer to specific journals for models.
Actions to take
• Choose a concise, clear, and precise style.
• Favor active voice. Many students and some faculty believe that passive voice is the only
mode for a scientific paper. This attitude, thankfully, is changing. Current editors
encourage the use of active voice when appropriate. (Note that active constructions are
often possible without necessarily resorting to the increasingly accepted pronouns
“I/we.”) To encourage a tone of objectivity, personal pronouns should not dominate the
writing.
• Use present tense for established fact (e.g. previously published in a peer reviewed
journal) and past tense for the work and findings you are presenting. For example, the
statement, “Sea urchin embryos disassociate under low salt conditions (McClay 1978),”
would be appropriate in an introduction; whereas the statement, “The embryos
disassociated when placed in the chamber. This could be due to low salt conditions
(McClay 1978),” would be appropriate in your discussion section.
• Include captions, and refer to the figures in your narrative text. Figures don’t speak for
themselves.
• Cite your sources. Each fact presented that is not common knowledge must be easily
traceable. When several experiments support a claim, cite all of them so the degree of
experimental support for that claim is apparent.

Science writing
What is “scientific writing”?
A distinction needs to be made, I think, between “scientific writing” and “science writing.” With scientific writing,
The authors are professional scientists who make their living doing research; it also includes scientists-in-training, i.e., graduate students, who may need to have a paper published in a reputable, peer-reviewed journal as a prerequisite for graduation.
Scientific writing encompasses types or genres such as peer-reviewed articles, technical reports, and grant proposals, each of which serves a specific purpose and is intended for a particular audience.
Scientific writing can thus be defined as “experts communicating through the written word with other experts or as experts to a non-technical or non-scientific audience.”
This definition eliminates science journalists, technical writers, and scientific amateurs, all of whom may be highly intelligent and gifted writers but who are not scientists by profession.
This definition emphasizes communication through the written word, as opposed to video presentations, online lectures, or verbal exchanges that take place between colleagues in the hallways.
 Lastly, there is room in this definition both for scientists communicating with other scientists and for scientists communicating with non-scientists such as Congressional committees (reports and formal testimony), foundation directors (grant proposals), company managers (technical reports), or the general public (popular science).

Definition:
(1)   Writing about scientific subject matter, often in a non-technical manner for an audience of non-scientists (a form of journalism or creative nonfiction).
(2)   Writing that reports scientific observations and results in a manner governed by specific conventions (a form of technical writing). Also known as scientific writing.



On Explaining Science

  • The question is not "should" you explain a concept or process, but "how" can you do so in a way that is clear and so readable that it is simply part of the story?
·         Use explanatory strategies such as . . .
·         Active-voice verbs
Analogies and metaphors
- Backing into an explanation, that is, explaining before labeling
- Selecting critical features of a 
process and being willing to set aside the others, as too much explanatory detail will hurt rather than help.
  • People who study what makes an explanation successful have found that while giving examples is helpful, giving non examples is even better.

    Non examples are examples of what something is not. Often, that kind of example will help clarify what the thing is. If you were trying to explain groundwater, for instance, you might say that, while the term seems to suggest an actual body of water, such as a lake or an underground river that would be an inaccurate image. Groundwater is not a body of water in the traditional sense; rather, as Katherine Rowan, communications professor, points out, it is water moving slowly but relentlessly through cracks and crevices in the ground below us. . . .
  • Be acutely aware of your readers' beliefs. You might write that chance is the best explanation of a disease cluster; but this could be counterproductive if your readers reject chance as an explanation for anything. If you are aware that readers' beliefs may collide with an explanation you give, you may be able to write in a way that doesn't cause these readers to block their minds to the science you explain.

 Using tenses in scientific writing
Tense considerations for science writing
When you write an experimental report, or draft a thesis chapter, you need to choose which tense, or tenses, to use.
This flyer provides advice intended to help you become more conscious of what the choice of verb tense involves, and to become better able to notice the tense choices that writers in your particular field have made. From your chosen tense, your reader receives two kinds of information. One concerns time: it is about ‘when’ (past, present or future). The other relates to whether an event or process is open or closed.
The examples below illustrate the distinction between ‘open’ and ‘closed’ events: 
How long were you at Melbourne Uni? 
Simple past / closed event: the other person has already graduated.
How long have you been at Melbourne Uni?
Present perfect / open event: the other person is still engaged on his / her course.
What do tenses do?
Verb tenses present a relationship between
• the present moment (now), and,
• another moment or period in time (which may be long or short).
These moments or periods may be in the past, present or future.
Tenses manage time by placing them within particular relationships or ‘time frameworks’.
As a generalisation: in various types of scientific writing, some time frameworks are more commonly used than others. Their frequency varies from one section of a paper or report to another, and they can also vary between one scientific discipline and another.
The next section gives some advice about the various tenses.
Abstract
This usually refers to your unpublished results and uses the past tense.
Introduction
Your introduction needs to include background information which is generally accepted as fact in a
discipline. You also need to explain why the research you are reporting is important. It is usually resented in
the present tense. Example:
Genomics provides crucial information for rational drug design.
You will need to refer to existing research relevant to your work, and you can indicate your opinion of the research you are writing about by careful tense selection.
For example, when you use the present tense you are indicating to the reader that you believe that the research findings are still true and relevant, even though the original research may have been conducted some time ago. Example:
Many of the lakes and wetlands in the region are located in craters or valleys blocked by early Pliocene lava flows (Ollier & Joyce, 1964).
Present perfect tense to report research
If you use present perfect tense in your introduction when you refer to previous research, you communicate ‘recency’ or ‘currency’. Currency may be positive (asserting that previous studies have established a firm research foundation) or negative (asserting that not enough relevant or valid work has yet been done). 
Positive and negative currency can even be asserted in the same sentence, as in the example below (which uses the passive voice): Example:
A great deal of research has been conducted on the basic techniques of nuclear transfer, but few
experiments have been carried out to discover the most appropriate age of the cytoplasm to support nuclear transfer most effectively.
This suggests that you believe that more experiments are necessary. The existence of a ‘research gap’ is further emphasised by the phrase: ‘but few experiments’.
Methods
Past tense to describe what was done
In your methods section it is customary to use a form of the simple past tense to describe what you did in your study. Passive voice is often used. Examples:
Total phosphorous (TP) and total nitrogen (TN) were measured in the laboratory using standard procedures.
The standard protocol was followed for the preparation of the media from stock solutions.
The two previous examples are in the past tense, but in the passive voice. Have a look at the following examples in the past passive and past active voice.
Past passive
Three 2 litre samples were taken at a depth of between 0.1 and 0.5 m at the down-wind end of each wetland.
Past active
Each of the three groups took 2 litre samples at a depth of between 0.1 and 0.5m at the down-wind nd of each wetland.
From your reading, which voice do you think is most often used in your scientific discipline – active, or passive?
Present tense for diagrams and figures
If you use figures or diagrams to help explain what you did, refer to the figure or diagram using the present tense. Examples:
Table 1 above demonstrates the success of cloning in various animal species.
Figure 2 below shows methylation in mouse 2-cell embryos.
Results
Past tense for results obtained
In the results section, use the past tense to detail the results you obtained. Examples:
Overall, more than 70% of the insects collected were non-phytophagous. 
Results indicated that prolonged exposure to ultra-violet radiation had a positive correlation with the
development of melanomas.
Following activation of NT oocytes with strontium, the cell cycle resumed in both groups.
Present tense to refer to figures, tables and graphs
As in the previous sections, use the present tense when you refer to figures, tables and graphs.
Examples: Figure 1 displays the comparative variation in the morphology of donor chromatin in both age groups of oocytes.
Table 1 below shows the stream flows calculated for each stream using Equation 1.
Discussion
Present tense to explain significance of results
In your discussion section, you will explain the significance of the results. The present tense is normally used for this. Example:
Removal of vegetation for agricultural purposes appears to negatively affect the water quality of streams.
Past tense to summarise findings, with present tense to interpret results
Writers may use the past tense to summarise their findings, in combination with the present tense to
explain or interpret what the results mean. Examples:
As the maxima and minima did not correspond to high and low tides, it is possible that the patterns observed may not be the result of mixing of waters with different concentrations.
Leaf carbon and phenolic content did not differ across sites, indicating that the response of secondary plant chemicals such as phenolics to water is complex.
In Example 1, the phrases ‘it is possible that’ and ‘may not be’ are used to indicate that other explanations are possible. This is an example of the use of limiting words to discuss findings in an academically tentative way.
Example 2 is less tentative. If you make a statement such as this, you are completely confident that your results and conclusion are correct.
Conclusion
A combination of tenses to highlight past research and future directions
In the final section of your thesis or report you summarise the main findings and the major implications of the study, point out any limitations, and offer suggestions for future research. To do these things you may use a combination of tenses. Example:
Although the study found evidence of tillage and irrigation within the study area, from the data collected it was not possible to determine if the effects of agriculture upstream cause (or caused) higher levels of total nitrogen downstream. Further studies are therefore necessary to determine the effects of agriculture on the health of Stringybark Creek.

The Writing process: Prewriting, Writing, Rewriting


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What Is Prewriting?

Prewriting is the first stage of the writing process and the point at which we discover and explore our initial ideas about a subject. Prewriting helps us to get our ideas on paper, though not usually in an organized form, and brainstorm thoughts that might eventually make their way into our writing. Listed below are some of the most common types of prewriting techniques. You should become familiar with all of these and figure out the one that works best for you. The different types of prewriting that we will explore here are freewriting, brainstorming, clustering, tagmemics, and journalistic technique.

Some Useful Prewriting Strategies


Freewriting

Freewriting involves jotting down on paper all of the ideas you have on a particular topic before you even begin to read about it or do research. You are not worried about complete sentences, proper spelling, or correct punctuation and grammar. Instead, you are interested in “dumping” all of the information you have on paper. You should write everything that comes into your head—even if it doesn’t necessarily make sense yet. Give your self a set amount of time (maybe five to ten minutes), and write down everything that comes to mind about your topic.

Example: I have to write a paper about the environment. I have no idea where to start! I know there are many problems with the environment, but I don’t know much about this topic. Maybe I could take a look at my biology book to come up with some ideas. I know my biology professor is also really into the environment, so maybe I could ask for his help. I remember he was talking about hybrid cars in class the other day and how much better those are for the environment. What is a hybrid car? I know it uses some sort of alternative fuel and they are becoming very popular. Maybe that is something I could write about…

Brainstorming

Much like freewriting, brainstorming involves capturing all of the thoughts, ideas, and fragments in your head and writing them down on paper. Often, brainstorming looks more like a list while freewriting may look more like a paragraph. With either strategy, your goal is to get as many ideas down on paper as you can.

Example:         Environment
                        Problems
                        Future
                        Cars
                        Alternative fuels
                        Hybrid cars
                        Costs
                        Benefits?

Clustering

With this technique, you start with a circle in the middle that contains your main idea and then you draw lines to other, smaller circles that contain sub-ideas or issues related to the main idea. Try to group like ideas together so as to organize yourself.

Example: About the value of a college education



Particle, Wave, Field (Tagmemics)
The basic idea underlying tagmemics can be easily stated: an object, experience, or idea can be viewed as a particle (a static unit), a wave (a dynamic unit changing over time), or a field (a unit seen in the context of a larger network of relationships). Each of these perspectives encourages you to ask different kinds of questions about your subject (represented here as X).

  • Particle perspective:      What is X?
  • Wave perspective:        How has X changed over time?
  • Field perspective:          How does X relate to Y or Z?



 

Example:
If you view something as a particle, you focus on it as a static (still) entity. For example, if you were exploring ideas for a sociology paper on the transformation of the American nuclear family, you could use a particle perspective to ask questions like the following:

  • What does the term nuclear family mean?
  • Who formulated the term nuclear family?
  • What features characterize the nuclear family?

If you look at a subject from the wave perspective, you view it as dynamic or changing over time. The wave perspective would encourage you to ask the following questions:

  • How long has the nuclear family characterized family structure in America?
  • When did the nuclear family begin to change?
  • What factors have caused the nuclear family to change?
  • How might these factors affect the American family in the future?

Finally, if you look at a subject from a field perspective, you ask questions about the way that the subject functions as a part of a larger network of relationships. This perspective would encourage you to ask questions like these:
  • How are changes in the structure of the American family related to other changes, such as those in the work force, organized religion, the educational system, and divorce rates?
  • What are the consequences of changes in the nuclear family for American life in general? For politics? For social services? For education?

Journalistic Technique

As you may know, journalists have six important questions they need to answer about any story they report: who, what, when, where, why, and how. By answering these questions, journalists can be certain that they have provided the most important information about an event, issue, or problem to their readers.

These questions are also useful to you as writers when you are describing and event or writing an informative essay. As with the exploded moment, this technique allows you to make sure you have provided all of the important and specific details of a situation.

Example:
Suppose that your government professor has asked to write about the political conflict in the Middle East. Using the journalistic technique, you could begin working on the paper by asking yourself the following questions:

  • Who is involved in the conflict?
  • What issues most clearly divide those engaged in this dispute?
  • When did the troubles in the Middle East begin, and how have they developed over time?
  • Where does the conflict seem most heated or violent?
  • Why have those living in this area found it so difficult to resolve the situation?
  • How might this conflict be resolved?

Using the journalistic technique helps you make sure you have answered all of the important questions.

Other Useful Strategies

Aside from the strategies listed on these pages, it is also sometimes useful to discuss your ideas with a classmate, friend, or professor. Often, brainstorming aloud and hearing your ideas in auditory fashion can help you think about ways to start your paper. A great resource is the Writing Lab. You do not have to have a rough draft to go the lab; often, it is useful to go there and brainstorm ideas with one of the tutors. Finally, before you begin your prewriting techniques, make sure you thoroughly understand the purpose and audience for the assignment. Ask questions if you are unsure what you are supposed to do. It is difficult to prewrite if you do not understand the assignment.

Why Use these Techniques?

Though you have already used brainstorming, clustering, or any of a number of other prewriting techniques, the particle, wave, field and journalistic techniques are slightly more formal. Try these new ways of prewriting and compare them to the previous strategies you used. The key to any prewriting is finding something that works for you and also finding a technique that is comprehensive enough. Jotting down a word or sentence or two for prewriting is usually not enough; the more ideas you can get on paper in the early stages of writing, the stronger your final paper will be.

Parting Words

Remember to save all of your prewriting! You will have to turn in this step with the rest of your writing, so make sure you put is somewhere safe until the paper is due. Also, your prewriting will often look very different from the final draft. That’s ok—remember that this is just the first step to get you started writing. Your writing will evolve in each step you take it through.

Professional and Technical Writing/Design/Document Organization/Organizational Patterns


Organizational Patterns

There are seven different patterns that are commonly used to organize documents: Formal classification, informal classification, comparison, partitioning, segmenting, cause/effect, and problem/solution. Which organizational pattern is used will depend on the type of document that is being composed; however, the goal of effective organizing is to make the document easier to use, and several organizational patterns are often used in a single document.

Formal Classification

Formal classification is simply grouping facts together based on their common attributes. Each group is often divided into subgroups enabling the facts to be precisely classified. Formal classification requires that each fact can only be present in one grouping, and each grouping must follow the same principle. For example, to classify three animals, each animal should only fit into one group. A tiger, wolf, and zebra could be grouped into categories such as feline, canine, and equine. Each grouping follows the same principle of grouping the animals according to their biological family. A faulty classification would be feline, canine, and mammal because feline and canine are biological families and mammal refers to a biological class. Still further, each species can be broken up into subgroups and divisions like in cattle, Herefords and Jerseys are both cattle, but one is a beef animal and the other is a dairy animal.

Informal Classification

Informal classification can help you create a reader-centered communication when you need to organize information about a large number of items but find it impossible or undesirable to classify them according to the kind of objective characteristic that is necessary for formal classification.
Informal classification differs from formal classification because the groupings need not follow a consistent principle of classification; however, like formal classification, each fact should still only fit into one grouping. For example, a tiger, wolf, and zebra could be classified into canines and African mammals. The groupings do not follow a consistent principle, but each animal can only be grouped into one category. Informal classification is a valid organizational pattern and can be very useful to readers when properly used.

Comparison

Comparisons are used in business documents to help readers make a decision and to help readers understand research findings. Two alternatives are compared to each other based on the same criteria. For example, two building sites may be compared to decide which site to build a warehouse. Site A and Site B could both be compared based on development cost, road access, property taxes, distance to customers, and so on. Comparisons are useful when readers must evaluate several options.
In some ways, comparison is like classification. You begin with a large set of facts about the things you are comparing, and you group the facts around points of comparison that enable your readers to see how the things are like and unlike one another. In comparisons written to support decision-making, points of comparison are called criteria. When writing a comparison, you can choose either of two organizational patterns. Both include the same contents but arrange the contents differently.
Consider, for example, Tiffany's situation. Tiffany's employer has decided to replace the aging machines it uses to stamp out metal parts for the bodies of large trucks. Tiffany has been assigned to investigate the two machines the company is considering. Having amassed hundreds of pages of information, she must now decide how to organize her report to the company's executives. For organizing her comparison, Tiffany can choose to use the divided pattern or the alternating pattern.
Divided Pattern
Machine A
Cost
Efficiency
Construction Time
Air Pollution
Et cetera
Machine B
Cost
Efficiency
Construction Time
Air Pollution
Et cetera
Alternating Pattern
Cost
Machine A
Machine B
Efficiency
Machine A
Machine B
Construction Time
Machine A
Machine B
Air Pollution
Machine A
Machine B
Et Cetera
Machine A
Machine B

Partitioning

Partitioning refers to describing an object. If a document must be written about a bicycle, a writer may divide the description into the smaller parts of the bicycle. A writer may first describe the braking system, then the gear system, then the frame, seat, and tires. By dividing the document into smaller parts, information becomes easier to locate and the document becomes more useful to the reader.

Guidelines for Describing an Object

  1. Choose a principle of classification suited to your readers and purpose.
  2. Use only one basis for partitioning at a time.
  3. Arrange the parts of your description in a way your readers will find useful.
  4. When describing each part, provide details that your readers will find useful.
  5. Include graphics if they will help your readers understand and use your information about the object.

Segmenting

Segmenting is similar to partitioning, except segmenting refers to describing a process. Typically, a writer will use segmenting when the goal of the document is for the reader to perform the process. Cookbook recipes are often segmented. When describing how to prepare a cake, the process to make the cake must be described first. Then, the process of making the frosting is described. After this, the recipe might explain how to frost the cake. By segmenting the document, the recipe is broken down into smaller, manageable steps. This makes the process easier to perform for the reader.
A general description of a process explains the relationship of events over time. You may have either of two purposes in describing a process:
  • To enable your readers to perform the process. For example, you may be writing instructions that will enable your readers to analyze the chemicals in a sample of live tissue, make a photovoltaic cell, apply for a loan, or run a computer program.
  • To enable your readers to understand the process, For example, you might want your readers to understand the following:
    • How something is done. For instance, how coal is transformed into synthetic diamonds.
    • How something works. For instance, how the lungs provide oxygen to the bloodstream.
    • How something happened. For instance, how the United States developed the space programs that eventually landed astronauts on the moon.

Principles of Classification for Segmenting

To determine where to segment the process, you need a principle of classification. Commonly used principles include the time when the steps are performed (first day, second day; spring, summer, fall), the purpose of the steps (to prepare the equipment, to examine the results), and the tools used to perform the steps(for example, table saw, drill press, and so on). Processes can be segmented by a variety of classification principles. Pick the principle that best supports your readers' goals.

Guidelines For Segmenting

  1. Choose a principle for segmenting suited to your readers and your purpose.
  2. Make your smallest groupings manageable.
  3. Describe clearly the relationships among the steps and groups of steps.
  4. Provide enough detail about each step to meet your readers' needs.
  5. Include graphics if they will help your readers understand and use your information about the process.

Cause and Effect

Documents organized by cause and effect help readers understand how one event is caused by another. Cause and effect documents often attempt to persuade readers that a cause and effect relationship actually exists. Cause and effect can be difficult to link. Evidence of the relationship must be chosen carefully. If used correctly, a document organized by cause and effect can be very persuasive and useful to a reader.
At work, you are likely to write about cause and effect for one of two distinct purposes.
  • to help your readers understand a cause-and-effect relationship.
  • to persuade your readers that a certain cause-and-effect relationship exists.
The strategies for organizing for these two purposes are somewhat different.

Problem and Solution

Problems and their solutions will be one of the most frequent topics of your on-the-job writing. The problems you discuss may arise from dissatisfaction with some strategy, product, process, or policy. Alternatively, they may arise from an aspiration to achieve a new goal, such as great efficiency, or take advantage of a new opportunity, such as the potential to do business in another country.
The goal of a document organized by problem and solution is to propose a future action. Like cause and effect documents, problem and solution documents need to be persuasive. The writer must first show that a problem exists, and then show that the proposed solution is the best method to solve the problem. Problem and solution documents are very common in business writing and often take the form of a business proposal.

Guidelines For Persuading Readers To Accept Your Proposed Solution

  1. Describe the problem in a way that make it seem significant to your readers.
  2. Describe your method.
  3. When describing your method, explain how it will solve the problem. Show them that your method is the best option for them given their circumstances.
  4. Anticipate and respond to objections.
  5. Specify the benefits.
  6. Acknowledge the weaknesses of your solution. Your audience is going to find weaknesses whether you present them or not. Your ideas will look more credible if you acknowledge the weaknesses of your solution, and then show how they can be overcome.
  7. Include graphics if they will help your readers understand and approve your proposed solution.
  8. Avoid sounding confrontational. This will deter your readers. You need them to open to your ideas, not defensive of their ideas.
  9. Keep in mind that you won't be able to persuade all of your readers, all of the time. Sometimes, you have to accept that they acknowledge your suggestions. In time, they might still change their minds.
  10. Get straight to the point. Business people don't want to waste time listening to you beat around the bush; just give them what they need.

The Writing Process

Whether you know it or not, there’s a process to writing – which many writers follow naturally. If you’re just getting started as a writer, though, or if you always find it a struggle to produce an essay, short story or blog, following the writing process will help.
I’m going to explain what each stage of the writing process involves, and I’ll offer some tips for each section that will help out if you’re still feeling stuck!

1. Prewriting

Have you ever sat staring at a blank piece of paper or a blank document on your computer screen? You might have skipped the vital first stage of the writing process: prewriting. This covers everything you do before starting your rough draft. As a minimum, prewriting means coming up with an idea!
Ideas and Inspiration
Ideas are all around you. If you want to write but you don’t have any ideas, try:
  • Using a writing prompt to get you started.
  • Writing about incidents from your daily life, or childhood.
  • Keeping a notebook of ideas – jotting down those thoughts that occur throughout the day.
  • Creating a vivid character, and then writing about him/her.
Tip: Once you have an idea, you need to expand on it. Don’t make the mistake of jumping straight into your writing – you’ll end up with a badly structured piece.
Building on Your Idea
These are a couple of popular methods you can use to add flesh to the bones of your idea:
  • Free writing: Open a new document or start a new page, and write everything that comes into your head about your chosen topic. Don’t stop to edit, even if you make mistakes.
  • Brainstorming: Write the idea or topic in the center of your page. Jot down ideas that arise from it – sub-topics or directions you could take with the article.
Once you’ve done one or both of these, you need to select what’s going into your first draft.
Planning and Structure
Some pieces of writing will require more planning than others. Typically, longer pieces and academic papers need a lot of thought at this stage.
First, decide which ideas you’ll use. During your free writing and brainstorming, you’ll have come up with lots of thoughts. Some belong in this piece of writing: others can be kept for another time.
Then, decide how to order those ideas. Try to have a logical progression. Sometimes, your topic will make this easy: in this article, for instance, it made sense to take each step of the writing process in order. For a short story, try the eight-point story arc.

2. Writing

Sit down with your plan beside you, and start your first draft (also known as the rough draft or rough copy). At this stage, don’t think about word-count, grammar, spelling and punctuation. Don’t worry if you’ve gone off-topic, or if some sections of your plan don’t fit too well. Just keep writing!
If you’re a new writer, you might be surprised that professional authors go through multiple drafts before they’re happy with their work. This is a normal part of the writing process – no-one gets it right first time.
Some things that many writers find helpful when working on the first draft include:
  • Setting aside at least thirty minutes to concentrate: it’s hard to establish a writing flow if you’re just snatching a few minutes here and there.
  • Going somewhere without interruptions: a library or coffee shop can work well, if you don’t have anywhere quiet to write at home.
  • Switching off distracting programs: if you write your first draft onto a computer, you might find that turning off your Internet connection does wonders for your concentration levels! When I’m writing fiction, I like to use the free program Dark Room (you can find more about it on our collection of writing software).
You might write several drafts, especially if you’re working on fiction. Your subsequent drafts will probably merge elements of the writing stage and the revising stage.
Tip: Writing requires concentration and energy. If you’re a new writer, don’t try to write for hours without stopping. Instead, give yourself a time limit (like thirty minutes) to really focus – without checking your email!

3. Revising

Revising your work is about making “big picture” changes. You might remove whole sections, rewrite entire paragraphs, and add in information which you’ve realized the reader will need. Everyone needs to revise –even talented writers.
The revision stage is sometimes summed up with the A.R.R.R. (Adding, Rearranging, Removing, Replacing) approach:
Adding
What else does the reader need to know? If you haven’t met the required word-count, what areas could you expand on? This is a good point to go back to your prewriting notes – look for ideas which you didn’t use.
Rearranging
Even when you’ve planned your piece, sections may need rearranging. Perhaps as you wrote your essay, you found that the argument would flow better if you reordered your paragraphs. Maybe you’ve written a short story that drags in the middle but packs in too much at the end.
Removing
Sometimes, one of your ideas doesn’t work out. Perhaps you’ve gone over the word count, and you need to take out a few paragraphs. Maybe that funny story doesn’t really fit with the rest of your article.
Replacing
Would more vivid details help bring your piece to life? Do you need to look for stronger examples and quotations to support your argument? If a particular paragraph isn’t working, try rewriting it.
Tip: If you’re not sure what’s working and what isn’t, show your writing to someone else. This might be a writers’ circle, or just a friend who’s good with words. Ask them for feedback. It’s best if you can show your work to several people, so that you can get more than one opinion.

4. Editing

The editing stage is distinct from revision, and needs to be done after revising. Editing involves the close-up view of individual sentences and words. It needs to be done after you’ve made revisions on a big scale: or else you could agonize over a perfect sentence, only to end up cutting that whole paragraph from your piece.
When editing, go through your piece line by line, and make sure that each sentence, phrase and word is as strong as possible. Some things to check for are:
  • Have you used the same word too many times in one sentence or paragraph? Use a thesaurus to find alternatives.
  • Are any of your sentences hard to understand? Rewrite them to make your thoughts clear.
  • Which words could you cut to make a sentence stronger? Words like “just” “quite”, “very”, “really” and “generally” can often be removed.
  • Are your sentences grammatically correct? Keep a careful look out for problems like subject-verb agreement and staying consistent in your use of the past, present or future tense.
  • Is everything spelt correctly? Don’t trust your spell-checker – it won’t pick up every mistake. Proofread as many times as necessary.
  • Have you used punctuation marks correctlyCommas often cause difficulties. You might want to check out the Daily Writing Tips articles on punctuation.
Tip: Print out your work and edit on paper. Many writers find it easier to spot mistakes this way.

5. Publishing

The final step of the writing process is publishing. This means different things depending on the piece you’re working on.
Bloggers need to upload, format and post their piece of completed work.
Students need to produce a final copy of their work, in the correct format. This often means adding a bibliography, ensuring that citations are correct, and adding details such as your student reference number.
Journalists need to submit their piece (usually called “copy”) to an editor. Again, there will be a certain format for this.
Fiction writers may be sending their story to a magazine or competition. Check guidelines carefully, and make sure you follow them. If you’ve written a novel, look for an agent who represents your genre. (There are books like Writer’s Market, published each year, which can help you with this.)
Tip: Your piece of writing might never be published. That’s okay – many bestselling authors wrote lots of stories or articles before they got their first piece published. Nothing that you write is wasted, because it all contributes to your growth as a writer.

Conclusion

The five stages of the writing process are a framework for writing well and easily. You might want to bookmark this post so that you can come back to it each time you start on a new article, blog post, essay or story: use it as a checklist to help you.